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[Dead Detention 2 #9]

Well, the music didn't really fit to tha ambiance you set up in the previous chapter. The teens were supposed to wet their pants after be reckted by the black guy, but the music... I supposed ya know what I mean.

JackAstral responds:

Yeah that's something I've always found hard with this series - balancing the overal lightheartedness with depth when something serious happens. I never want to go to far either way, so it's kinda in this weird middle ground...I'll keep in that mind, thank you :)

[Oh Chapel]

I really liked your short game, but the cheracter is slow, and the animation are jerky. I know this is not really important in that king of game, but it would have been nice to fully enjoy your work.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I think the game still has some lag issues, so I'll make sure to look into those ASAP

[Alula Falling #5]

NO! WHY??????
WHY DID THEY THROW THEIR PHONES??? YOU MONSTER!!! ;_;

Meh... Except that, I really liked your game. I couldn't belive Alula became one of these >SPOILER<, and the fact no one of them couldn't escape to their fate gave me chills. :s

Your game is very sad by moments, like the others, but the gameplay confused me. I mean, You didn't have to change its appearance, it was already great, and in the end, it was the same.

PS: About "The Shovel"... The door in the church is very well hidden, I had to restart the game three time to find it :/

See ya for another game :)

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I hope you do :-)

[Legend of the Dark Dragon]

Could be better. The idea isn't original, but great and quite well exploited here. The bad sides of your game is the gameplay ( existent but not rich) and your game's lifespan. Come on dude, it's too short, how can an normal player find your game interesting and fun if he hasn't time to enjoy it?
You must rework on it, could be a nice game.

Nittram responds:

I was... 13? or 14 when I made this. I get it's not a good game, but thank you for your review! It could be a better game, I guess, but I think I'll direct my efforts to doing something better than remaking this :3

[The Shovel]

Meh... I think I'm retarded, because I can't finish it (maybe because I did something wrong)...

Honestly, I play with the arrow keys, so playing in WASD here is not easy... The walking animation though... ^^

JackAstral responds:

I added arrow key controls just now!

You just need to grab the shovel from the shed, and then walk to the ending area to "complete" it :b

[Dead Detention 2 #6]

The yellow saber is misplaced. It's located just under Tom's... Yeah...

JackAstral responds:

O_O

[Dead Detention 2 #5]

Who is the guy with black clothes and the burned face? I don't remember... :/

JackAstral responds:

Shia! He was the strongest Armageddon Child at Zone Zero

[Dead Detention 2 #4]

Not bad, but the music doesn't really fit to the situation... And maybe there's too much dialogue, and not enough action. But your work is great! I must restart from the beginning because I was too fast, so I did not see the medal... ;_;

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! Yeah I think there was maybe a little too much exposition in this episode- but I think it kinda needed it. Every episode after ep 6 will be really intense and action-y, promise !