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[Dead Detention 2 #9]

Well, the music didn't really fit to tha ambiance you set up in the previous chapter. The teens were supposed to wet their pants after be reckted by the black guy, but the music... I supposed ya know what I mean.

JackAstral responds:

Yeah that's something I've always found hard with this series - balancing the overal lightheartedness with depth when something serious happens. I never want to go to far either way, so it's kinda in this weird middle ground...I'll keep in that mind, thank you :)

[Oh Chapel]

I really liked your short game, but the cheracter is slow, and the animation are jerky. I know this is not really important in that king of game, but it would have been nice to fully enjoy your work.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I think the game still has some lag issues, so I'll make sure to look into those ASAP

[Alula Falling #5]

NO! WHY??????
WHY DID THEY THROW THEIR PHONES??? YOU MONSTER!!! ;_;

Meh... Except that, I really liked your game. I couldn't belive Alula became one of these >SPOILER<, and the fact no one of them couldn't escape to their fate gave me chills. :s

Your game is very sad by moments, like the others, but the gameplay confused me. I mean, You didn't have to change its appearance, it was already great, and in the end, it was the same.

PS: About "The Shovel"... The door in the church is very well hidden, I had to restart the game three time to find it :/

See ya for another game :)

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I hope you do :-)

[Legend of the Dark Dragon]

Could be better. The idea isn't original, but great and quite well exploited here. The bad sides of your game is the gameplay ( existent but not rich) and your game's lifespan. Come on dude, it's too short, how can an normal player find your game interesting and fun if he hasn't time to enjoy it?
You must rework on it, could be a nice game.

Nittram responds:

I was... 13? or 14 when I made this. I get it's not a good game, but thank you for your review! It could be a better game, I guess, but I think I'll direct my efforts to doing something better than remaking this :3

[The Shovel]

Meh... I think I'm retarded, because I can't finish it (maybe because I did something wrong)...

Honestly, I play with the arrow keys, so playing in WASD here is not easy... The walking animation though... ^^

JackAstral responds:

I added arrow key controls just now!

You just need to grab the shovel from the shed, and then walk to the ending area to "complete" it :b

[Dead Detention 2 #6]

The yellow saber is misplaced. It's located just under Tom's... Yeah...

JackAstral responds:

O_O

[Dead Detention 2 #5]

Who is the guy with black clothes and the burned face? I don't remember... :/

JackAstral responds:

Shia! He was the strongest Armageddon Child at Zone Zero

[Lucario Vs The World]

Meh...

I would have liked to say I enjoyed this game. But it's just frustrating. The ennemies and platform's hitboxes doesn't match to the sprites, and the character (Lucario!!! :3 ) slides on the pretty little platforms. The music is repetitive; it's not a annoying music, but it's repetitive, like all levels of this game.

Don't think I'm mean with you. I think you have some potentiel, which only beg you to be exploited correctly. But your game is very short, and all those problems spoil it. Just fix them, and longthen it (I hope it's the exact word, Google Trad sucks :p ).

PS: Hum... Can you make difference between left and right? Because you told us to go on the bottom left of the map, and the exit is on the bottom right :p

2Mickennxtre68 responds:

Thanks for responding and following! Lucario is pretty great, isn't he?
(I made a dating sim with him in it too, but that might not be your thing haha)

[Dead Detention 2 #4]

Not bad, but the music doesn't really fit to the situation... And maybe there's too much dialogue, and not enough action. But your work is great! I must restart from the beginning because I was too fast, so I did not see the medal... ;_;

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! Yeah I think there was maybe a little too much exposition in this episode- but I think it kinda needed it. Every episode after ep 6 will be really intense and action-y, promise !

[Alula Falling #3]

I think that game will become an awesome game sooner or later ^^
Like always, I love your draws, the gameplay, and the new graphisms of battles. By the way... Were you insipred from "Undertale" to create the "SPARE" alternative?

Nice as always, I can't wait for the next part ^^

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I'm hoping to get the next part uploaded much sooner this time around.

I haven't played Undertale yet but I definatelyyyyyyyyyyyyy will soon, it totally seems like my kinda thing