Quasar47's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dead Detention 2 #4]

Not bad, but the music doesn't really fit to the situation... And maybe there's too much dialogue, and not enough action. But your work is great! I must restart from the beginning because I was too fast, so I did not see the medal... ;_;

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! Yeah I think there was maybe a little too much exposition in this episode- but I think it kinda needed it. Every episode after ep 6 will be really intense and action-y, promise !

[Alula Falling #3]

I think that game will become an awesome game sooner or later ^^
Like always, I love your draws, the gameplay, and the new graphisms of battles. By the way... Were you insipred from "Undertale" to create the "SPARE" alternative?

Nice as always, I can't wait for the next part ^^

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I'm hoping to get the next part uploaded much sooner this time around.

I haven't played Undertale yet but I definatelyyyyyyyyyyyyy will soon, it totally seems like my kinda thing

[Sonic the Hedgehog: The Dawn of a New Era]

Sorry, but my review will be written in French.

Je tiens tout d'abord à te dire que ton jeu n'est pas mauvais. Il respecte l'univers de Sonic, un jeu que j'adore, et j'aime bien l'arrivée de ces nouveaux personnages et ce suspens à la fin. La bande son aussi est pas mal, elle me rappelle plein de souvenirs de jeux auxquels je jouais autrefois. Mais malheureusement, ça ne suffit pas pour faire un bon jeu. Ton travail est trop court et se termine en trois minutes, le gameplay est quasiment inexistant, et... Eh bien, quand on pense à Sonic, on pense à un hérisson qui va vite, qui court au travers des montagnes, des vallées, etc... Pas à un hérisson qui court aussi vite qu'un vieillard dans un monde vide. Ton jeu mériterait d'être largement plus travaillé, plus approfondi. Si tu veux garder ces scènes, fais-toi plaisir. mais enrichis-les, fais-nous passer un bon moment.

Voilà, c'est tout. Normalement, j'aurais mis 3,5 étoiles pour ton jeu, mais je t'en ai mis 4 pour te soutenir dans ton travail. N'abandonne pas, et fais de ton mieux, tu verras, tu t'amélioreras de jour en jour ^^

Payn responds:

Thanks man, I see what you mean. This is still the very first episode though. I will improve and make every episode better than the one before that. :)

[Dead Detention 2 #3]

Can wait for the next episode ^^ You did a good job ^^

[Dead Detention 2 #2]

Nice ^^
But even if the ending music is awesome, can you please down the sound a little bit? i'ts too loud, even if I down my pc's sound :/

[Alula Falling #1]

This... Game... Looks... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have just a little question...
Why did she pushed the button "Join"? ^^
Technically, she knew her friend was a killer, so why did she trust her?

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! Their relationship will be explored a little more in the next eps- it'll allll make sense :-)

[Future Girlfriend: When two strangers meet]

Le jeu reste assez vide dans son ensemble malgré les différentes fins, mais j'adore le style graphique! C'est totalement différent de ce qu'on a l'habitude de voir, mais ce côté vieux film me séduit. En revanche, c'est dommage de n'avoir que deux couleurs, et pas de gris, parce que les décors ne sont pas vraiment détaillés :/

[A small talk]

Even if I'm french and I actually did'nt finished this game, I LOVE IT!

[Stifler | Demo]

This game has a lot of potential, but this demo is horribly empty. The gameplay is poor, and thesceneries are too short, so you can't enjoy the pixel art and the wasted landscape.